Derek's Feedback 25/11/10

We showed our rough edit to Derek and he pointed out that Harry pranked call a number of someone that is no less than 100 yards away. He said If he knows the storyline, He will easily get it the idea of the film But he said if someone else was watching it, They would struggle to find out the story. So We plan to Improve this by refiliming Harry with the phone going through his contacts and ringing the school bully so it much clearer for people to see and get the story more. We Now realised from the feedback we got, That we need to re-check every single second of our footage to ensure it understandable and clear what the storyline is. He also inplied that, at the end of the film when it switches to the text "It's Up to you." Is very jumpy in terms of jumping too quick from frame to frame. So we plan to improve on this by freezing the last frame and then slowly fading out to the text frame. Derek commented on the good parts that he enjoyed,




One of the bits derek enjoyed was the part when max punches "Harry" (Camera) and He asked how we captured it so good and We explained that we speeded up the clip but in reality it was a very slow process. As we didnt  want to break the camera by actually dropping it.



He also Liked our flashback and How well the sound effect was synced. I found the sound effect from www.soundbible.com.